It is my first one ~

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  1. timyuan

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    what do you think about this one?
    i can't fiture out a title for it. could you give one for it?
     
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    and which one better?
     
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    I like the first one with the chair. Gives a more complete story to my mind.

    Nice shot.
     
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    yes, with the chair is better (except for the black thing in the left lower corner).
    I think it's a great, great picture! Love how the drawing and real life seem to blend...:thumbup::thumbup:






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    Wonderful photo. It really keeps my interest. There's alot going on but it all seems to work together. A proper title would be something simple like "Busy" or something similar. I like the idea of a simple title for a busy photo.
     
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    thank you guys for comments
     
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    I really like the first one with the chair. Nice capture.
     
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    sure, you eyes are sharp :)

    I removed that black thing. hope it is acceptable for photography... mmm...
     
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    sure it is. This is your product. I LOVE it. Again, great photo!





    pascal
     
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    Great job!

    Sam
     
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    Really, really nice.
     
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    First off great photograph. How about a title like "Artist at Work" or "A Work in Progress".
     

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