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  1. ktanady

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    Hey guys, this is a photo of the Sunda Kelapa Port located in North Jakarta, Indonesia..
    still a newbie, so C&C's are very much appreciated, thanks..

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    I like this. Since it looks strongly processed I would like to see the original image too. :)

    My amateur thoughts:

    I wish the orange sunset extended higher into the sky and there wasn't a blown out bright spot in the clouds.

    The dock is vast and empty, so we probably don't need to see so much of it. A little less dock and a little more sky might work a little better.

    This looks like a great place to shoot... especially at sunset.
     
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    I think the vast emptiness of the dock works very well in this case.
     
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    I think the emptiness of the dock works well with the PP. It looks like old or eerie or both...
     
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    You mean it's Sunda Kelapa Port post apocalypse, lol. Neat effect. Maybe just a tad over done. But still cool. I would like to see the unedited also, if you don't mind. :thumbup:
     
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    lol..nicely put there, it does looks like the world had come to an end..

    here is the original image..
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    Wow... I was expecting something different. I think I appreciate your PP transformed version more now that you've shared the "O". Thanks!
     
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    Definitely some nice PP'ing going on here. Might be overdone but works well with this photo
     
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    Hmmm... overprocessed? Maybe. But given your starting point, you've created a pretty stunning image.
     

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