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  1. misstwinklytoes

    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

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    how much I've grown over the past.... 3 months or so. Can you tell me what has improved? What still needs improving?

    This is one of my "best" shots when I first got the cam:
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    And another from my first cam "shoot"
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    And these are more recent pictures:
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    BuS_RiDeR No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Well your focus has improved greatly. Very well done...

    However, I think I prefet the composition of the first one... But thats just me... Also I am not a fan of really bright colorful images (in most cases)... But thats just me...
     
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    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

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    I have to say part of the focus issues is due to the new lens! But irregardless, I'm liking the "new" focus better! Thanks busrider!
     
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    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    This shot however, has odd skin tones, and her head is too near the top of the frame, resulting in a cramped and tension-filled look to the photo. This shot is not well-composed, nor is it well-processed.
     
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    Were these shot in JPEG? With some processing in camera?
     
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    Geaux No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Truthfully, I think the first two shots posted are stronger than the latter two.
     
  7. misstwinklytoes

    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

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    No, they were RAW.

    Ouch Geaux, but I appreciate your honesty and opinion. :)
     
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    Geaux No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    lol, no OUCH. I meant it, not trying to put you down. I just think the poses/composition of the first two are very strong.
     
  9. misstwinklytoes

    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

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    I know, I didn't take it as a put down, just as you said it. :)

    I'm hoping to get the boy in #1 for some more senior shots, since I've learned a lot since then. (He was in a bad car accident and broke his ankle and neck, but is up for photos soon. What a trooper!)

    Maybe I'll combine my talents with his poses. :)
     

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