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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by myopia, Sep 18, 2008.

  1. myopia

    myopia TPF Noob!

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  2. yugamu

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    I like the feel of number 4........nice job. I feel number 4 and 5 are the strongest of the group. Keep clicking and thanks for sharing. :)
     
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    I only see 4 pictures? I like 1 and 4
     
  4. goliath

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    I like the warmth of #3 but would prefer with a subject slightly more illuminated and a little more contrast.

    Not sure what you want to acheive by "fixing the eye" but you can use the dodge tool on the shadows to lighten them up a bit. It would also require a bit of illumination, picture is a little too dark.

    #1 is a bit cool. Try warming photo filter in photoshop.
     
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    Very pretty subject, I like the feel of #3. I like #2 as well, but as goliath said I think its a bit dark.
     
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    Thanks for the feedback. This is really a first attempt at this kind of photo for me.
     
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    I like number 4 for some reason.... =\
     
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    nice
     

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