(Jason Choong in) The Apartment

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by heartpatrick, Mar 21, 2008.

  1. heartpatrick

    heartpatrick No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Hey All,

    Did this shoot in a dilapidated apartment in Cheras. I can't explain my fascination with graffiti-infested walls, darkened corridors, rusty metal works and abandoned pieces of furnitures. Hope you like them anyway.

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    The full set is available here:
    http://www.heartpatrick.com/peoplejason.html



    Thanks all.


    Patrick
    Travel | Photography | Design
    http://www.heartpatrick.com
     
  2. plentygood

    plentygood TPF Noob!

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    The squatting with the hands around the shins looks very unnatural and cheesy in 4 and 6 to me. I don't really know what it is though. I think it's maybe because when someone is in that pose, they are probably either looking around scared or have their head tucked down with their eyes closed.

    In terms of composition, tones, and location/background, I think you did well.
     
  3. memento

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    #2 and #5.. is how i've felt for as long as i can remember.
     
  4. spiffybeth

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    i really like the 5th one the best. its so cold and loney and far away :(
     
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    that is very very sad. do you need a hug? :hugs:
     
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    wow!
    they are great!
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