Jazz Al Parque Festival

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  1. pabloec20

    pabloec20 TPF Noob!

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    hi, this photo is for a jazz festival. in a public park in bogota,i want it to look natural, inviting people to come and sit in the park to listen to jazz
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    Umm, I'm not sure what you mean. Do you mean you are using this photo to entice people to come? If so, there are a few ways you may want to improve it. I think if the entire text was in focus, it would help. Also, the thing in the upper right corner is distracting.

    Maybe try it out in a park, or with people who are sitting in a park, and that is resting beside them.

    As it stands now, it doesn't evoke a feeling of coming to enjoy music. When I think of music, I think COLOR! Maybe with a colored background... Not sure here, I just think that it may not be sending the message you intend.

    Best of luck

    Kristal
     

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