Jeanette on the streets *May not be work safe*

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by TheBodyShot, Jul 12, 2004.

  1. TheBodyShot

    TheBodyShot TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys, I'm new to the board and talked to the admin about posting here to get some feedback for our photographers. I hope you like my posts and can offer some good criticism for our photographers.

    These ones were done by DJ Bynum dj@thebodyshot.com

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    See full set here

    Thanks,
    Tom
     
  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Welcome.

    One thing that I notices about most of these shots is that the model's eyes are not in sharp focus. Typically you want to have the subject's eyes in sharp focus. It's especially important when shooting in low light / wide aperture.
     
  3. canonrebel

    canonrebel TPF Noob!

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    I didn't notice the eyes :lol:

    I enjoyed the documentary-type style. I liked the images very much.

    The pictures had a central theme. I envisioned a street walker displaying her wares to potential clients.
     
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    The fourth one (even with the blown out areas) is by far the best.
     
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    graigdavis TPF Noob!

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    I wouldnt normaly put a critique in the gallery, but since you asked.

    They seem verry snapshot-ish. Nothing I could see being used in a magazine or anything of the sort.

    Better use of DOF and lighting would help a lot. I agree that the eyes need to be in focus before anything else, even if everything else is what you want us to see.

    Out of the bunch the second B&W (4th down) is the best. Good job with no bad hot spots when using the cameras flash. Again, shallow DOF would make it much better.
     
  6. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I maybe wrong but this look like Spam to me
     
  7. molested_cow

    molested_cow No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    He's aiming for the boobs!!! :p

    However I do think he's pretty successful in capturing the subject in low light condition. For me I have to use a tripot, if not flash which I hate.
     
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    You're wrong...nobody's selling anything--just asking for critique.
     
  9. TheBodyShot

    TheBodyShot TPF Noob!

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    Yea...It's not meant to be. We don't have a members section...there are no fee's at all...its really just a glorified personal site.

    Thanks for all your comments. DJ just did a shoot last night of Amber and I will be posting a few of those soon.

    Also...As I'm seeking critique for our pictures and allowing me to post on this board, I invite you to post on our Picture Post board as well for some more feedback. Yea, its mostly pics of girls, but general photography is equally as welcomed.

    http://www.thebodyshot.com/bathroomwall/viewforum.php?f=16

    Thanks,
    Tom
     
  10. Annette

    Annette TPF Noob!

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    Huh? You have your own board for posting images but you still need to post them here as well as the link to your board with an invitation for people to post on your board and this still isn't spam?? I guess ...

    Any way - as to the photos. I don't really care for them or the content so I haven't taken the time to look closely enough to determine if they are good or bad.

    No offense intended.
     
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    Ant TPF Noob!

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    If this isn't your kind of thing then why did you even bother posting in this thread? I mean you haven't exactly said anything constructive have you?

    No offense intended :wink:
     
  12. TheBodyShot

    TheBodyShot TPF Noob!

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    To be honest, I don't care if you come to my site or not. I'm honestly just looking for outside opinions than our regular guys oogling saying "ohh thats hot."

    But, I did have enough forethought to ask this site's admin if it would be ok before I even posted anything. I did not intend to start a controversy.

    In addition, hospitality should be a mutual thing, so that is the purpose of the invite to my boards.

    Finally...do you honestly think I would take this much time out of my day to explain myself to you and ask the admin permission if I intended to spam this site?

    That's all, carpal-tunnel is starting to set in,
    Tom
     

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