Jennifer in the Studio

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    Very natural. You could arrange more background here for more space.
     
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    Nice series! Personally, I would have preferred if she showed a hint of a smile in one of the pics, but that's just me. I especially like shots 3 and 5. The composition of 5 really rocks
     
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    Good work!

    Does the model have a favourite shot? (Because we're all hardest on ourselves, it's always interesting to see which shot the subject favours)
     
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    Very nice.

    One thing I noticed in a few of them, is that the light is very even...there isn't much a ratio on the model's face. The first & the last do have a ratio, which helps.
     
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    +1

    These are pretty good, but too even.

    #3 is a really nice shot, but would really have rocked at a 2:1 or 4:1 ratio.

    My only personal nit would be in shot #1, and that would be with the posing......it looks like a maternity shot. I not saying she looks fat, but look at the pose...arched way back with the hand on the hip like that accentuates the tummy area.
     
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    You can change the lighting pattern and the ratio, simply by moving the model, moving your own position or moving the lights. It's much more of a pain to move the lights, so remember to change your angle and not just have the model turning.
     
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