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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Bobbie0253, Dec 31, 2007.

  1. Bobbie0253

    Bobbie0253 TPF Noob!

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    I am VERY new at photography but thought this one turned out pretty good?


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    Trenton Romulox TPF Noob!

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    It looks a little warm in the color temperature department to me, but maybe that's just my monitor. I think the composition and DOF is good here though, and I'm glad to see the eyes are relatively in focus, but I still feel like the nose is the sharpest object in the picture, which is generally bad for portraiture. The angle is kind of fresh I guess, you don't see a mildly top-down portrait too much, at least not with the subject also centered.
     
  3. Bobbie0253

    Bobbie0253 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the feedback. I probably over did it with the adjusting. Here is the original. Feel free to edit and show me what I could have done better with the shot I took. I can work on angle and focus. This was my first ever attempt at a portrait.... and it was a spur of the moment try. I am VERY open to learning what would work better.

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  4. The_Traveler

    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    This is just underexposed a bit.
    Just use levels to fix the white point and it will be fine (once you crop it to 4 x 5)
     
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    I like the way you have edited it in PS.

    You have a good shot.
     
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    edited version looks way underexposed to me and the colors aren't true.

    for the original: cool the colors a barely noticeable amount and i think you have a great shot
     
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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    On my screen the first post has a decided greenish tinge to it.

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  8. Bobbie0253

    Bobbie0253 TPF Noob!

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    Is it just the first one with the greenish color or the second one(original) too? After you pointed it out I noticed it. My monitor is not calibrated yet, and is probably way off. I need to find a lab I like soon and do that.

    Thanks for the suggestion on the crop!
     
  9. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    There is a greenish tinge especially around his eyes in your brightened edition (i.e. the first picture shown), so that may well have come up with your brightening up a photo that is originally underexposed. But ok, I feel, underexposure may well happen when you do "firsts", and try to achieve them with ambient light only, I don't mind it too much, despite the fact that underexposure IS a technical flaw, of course. But I think you captured your son well here. His smile shows that he is half happy half wondering how it'll turn out what his dad is just doing, and I like that expression!

    And he has lovely brown eyes. The greenish tint in your edited version is taking away from them, which is a pity.
     
  10. Tantallonrox

    Tantallonrox TPF Noob!

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    Bobbie,

    Hope you don't mind, but I just had to try my hand at editing this photo. I used Lightroom and PS CS2. I'm by no means a pro but I think it turned out ok. If you don't like it or want me to remove it just say so.

    Here is your original:
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    And the edit:
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  11. JenR

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    Good job on your first try! Like the others of said, I think it is underexposed and has a color cast.

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    IMHO, the eyes are a tad overdone on the previous edit.


    ETA: EEK!! This now looks a little overexposed.
     

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