jeswaw's Pics-critique them, please

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  1. JESWAW

    JESWAW TPF Noob!

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    This Is of me driving down the road, sunwas intense going up this hill
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    A bridge in Northern KY
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    My Nissan Frontier and my Buddies Dodge
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    In Orlando FL at a conferance
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    My Girlfriend at the Orlando, FL Airport in front of a tram

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    A RX7 in the Junkyard
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    Cadillac Hood
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    So i guess....critique them and let me know. Im new to the game, but not the sport. I always loved taking photos. Now im actually half-way trying to get good at them. At the moment I use a Point and Shoot Camera (does the job, but i dont like it)
     
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    C&C...I need some help, so please help me that way i can get better
     
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    There all very much like snapshots... nothing strikes me as more then that. Just snapshots. Get closer to your subject, shoot all manual mode, and manual focus, and expose them right would be a good start. also pay attention to your framing they all seem so sloppy.
     
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    It struck you right. They are snap shots, with a point and shoot camera, nothing more. Nothing over the top here. I've been trying more lately, All except 2 of those pics are over a year old. Im saving up for a Cannon Rebel[/QUOTE]

    go for it, it's the first step in getting better.
     
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    go for it, it's the first step in getting better.[/quote]


    Exactly...Im using a 5.0 m.p 5x optical zoom Kodak V570 Point and Shoot...Does the job for clear photos. But none-the-less, its not a photography camera
     
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    at least you have a start
     
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    Aye-non Oh-non Imus TPF Noob!

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    I've seen some really good photos with P&S's. Work on your composition and settings. There's no reason you can't produce some photos worth hanging on your wall with the gear you have. Don't let some @$$wipe bring you down. Keep firing those shots and post for comments. Take the positives out of the critiques and comments and learn from them. Shelve the offensive and unproductive ones.
     
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    a5i36 is basically a moron, I wouldn't take his critiques seriously.

    I like #1 a lot, visceral shot with an interesting foreground and background. 4 has some interesting vertical lines, the placement of the fountains and the girl are well done.

    I like that you seem to play around with different angles an framing, keep at it.
     
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    true, disregard anything a5i736 says... more megapixels and an SLR camera does not make you a better photographer
     
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    I have more pics of that water fountain ill post up in the 1st post, but just to give you for warning...So expect so more pictures to c&c....Thanks for all of the + feedback...Its always a relief to get those
     
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    a5i736 is some 16 year old who claimed at one point to have like 10 years experience shooting or something like that if im not mistaken, take what he says with a grain of salt hes a smarta55

    by the way hes also a missionary. WOW
     

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