Jewels

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  1. Twig

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Lovely focus.
    Apt title! :D

    For the droplets to be the main subject, I feel they take up too little room within your frame, so if I had taken this, I might have felt tempted to crop it closer, but that is must me and my opinion.

    I am still debating with myself whethere I would have cropped in from the left or from the right, and whether I would have left the little grass blossom on the left inside the frame, as a sort of balance to the "jewels", or if I would have cropped out that to give the "jewels" all the space within "my" new frame.

    One thing is for sure: I would have cropped in from above, for I don't feel there is much there that still tells us anything, and then ... I begin to feel might have come in from the right and might have left that grass blossom there... Yes. I think I might have felt tempted to do that.

    I certainly like the focus here and the light.
     
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    Thanks for the feedback. =)

    Is this better?

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  4. Twig

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    Whoops. Wrong code.

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  5. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Much better, but I might have shifted the Jewels off center.
     
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    Really nice, the lighting is great. In my opinion, I think the DOF is a tad too shallow. I would of liked great detail in more of the droplets, not just 3 or 4.

    It doesn't really matter though, that's just my personal taste. Excellent shot.
     
  7. Twig

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    Thanks for the feedback. =)
     

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