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Lovely focus.
Apt title! :D

For the droplets to be the main subject, I feel they take up too little room within your frame, so if I had taken this, I might have felt tempted to crop it closer, but that is must me and my opinion.

I am still debating with myself whethere I would have cropped in from the left or from the right, and whether I would have left the little grass blossom on the left inside the frame, as a sort of balance to the "jewels", or if I would have cropped out that to give the "jewels" all the space within "my" new frame.

One thing is for sure: I would have cropped in from above, for I don't feel there is much there that still tells us anything, and then ... I begin to feel might have come in from the right and might have left that grass blossom there... Yes. I think I might have felt tempted to do that.

I certainly like the focus here and the light.
 
Thanks for the feedback. =)

Is this better?

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Much better, but I might have shifted the Jewels off center.
 
Really nice, the lighting is great. In my opinion, I think the DOF is a tad too shallow. I would of liked great detail in more of the droplets, not just 3 or 4.

It doesn't really matter though, that's just my personal taste. Excellent shot.
 

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