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  1. Frederico

    Frederico TPF Noob!

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    im just starting,
    trying some BWs, not exactly a studio, it was at home with limited lighting, what you think? critics please.

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  2. ksmattfish

    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

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    Very well done. What equipment/materials did you use?
     
  3. Frederico

    Frederico TPF Noob!

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    thanks, it is panasonic fz10, that i bought 3 days ago.

    Before that i used a old praktica L with lunasix3 (praktrica L doesnt have lightmeter) so im just getting started in digital world.

    shutter and apert. are 1/10sec (hand held with OIS) and f2.8, iso 100.
    i know it sounds dumb not to use tripod in this conditions but i really didnt have space in the room.
     
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    anua TPF Noob!

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    hey, Frederico,

    #1 - nice pose, but theres too much of 'white space' at the top for me, i prefer the second one -:)


    ps. hey, what does joana need the spoon for? :shock:

    nice portraits -:)
     
  5. karissa

    karissa The Untitled

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    I agree on that first one... I would like to see more of her body than above her head. Nice contrast however.
     
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    What's the significance of the spot between her eyes?
     
  7. Frederico

    Frederico TPF Noob!

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    thanks guys, i was just playing around with composition, didnt want it to fill all the photo, about the spoon, i added myself for no reason more than that i thought it needed some metal there. and i didnt do the make up, i just said its ok, so i guess theres no actual meaning for the spot.
     

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