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  1. elsaspet

    elsaspet TPF Noob!

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  2. JonMikal

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    where in the heck do you find these beautiful models?

    the bottom one is really good, but i can't help wonder if the first is cropped too tight at the top. just my .02
     
  3. elsaspet

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    This one came to me. LOL. Isn't she cute?

    As for the cropping, it's wasn't cropped. I'm always taking these catty wompy type shots, but because I'm new to photo land, I think they are kind of cool.

    I'll learn, promise.:)
     
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    i know why you have such beautiful models. you live in texas ;)
     
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    I like first one more, but I agree with JonMikal regarding crop.
     
  6. Tuna

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    Very nice - I don't mind the tight crop. But I do wonder about possibly a better background color, especially for the second one.

    Great job.

    Tuna
     
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    Great shots, agree with the crop and she looks a little red in the face on the first shot. I dont mind the second ones background, looks good.
     
  8. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Very nice! I prefer the higher main light in the second view. Also, the deeper-colored, sleeved top and the sweep of the hair keeps my attention on those beautiful eyes.

    Great expression in the first, but sleeveless, white shirt is a spoiler for me.

    The way you have the hair framing her face in the later is terrific!
     

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