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  1. gratefullydead

    gratefullydead TPF Noob!

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  2. jadin

    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    The point of interest is off center, the contrast is bold, your eye is led by the stream, it's a very unique subject. I'd say it's flawless. I don't think I'd change a thing. Even your border is great.
     
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    2Stupid2Duck TPF Noob!

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    I like it too. I can't fink of nuffin to change either.
     
  4. ksmattfish

    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

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    Very nice, I like it.

    I go back and forth on whether the big green leaves in the forground are distraction or not.
     
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    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    Great shot. At first the cinder block bothered me but looking at it a while and noticing the worn look says it belongs. Nice!
     

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