Just messing around (NSFW!)

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  1. WDodd

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    Got bored and decided to mess around with photoshop and the model (Alison) wanted me to see what you guys and gals thought. :D

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    I don't mean to offend you or anything, but..


    ..it looks a little porny.



    In my opinion, there's really nothing artistic, aesthetic, or professional about it.

    Gorgeous model though!
     
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    Very attractive model but the on board flash makes it........as Sw1tchFX so eolquently put it....."porny"
     
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    i agree with the others, the single flash casts a way too hard shadow, which si very disturbing, in particular on her back.
     
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    I might also add that she has no neck...
     
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    That’s poorly worded. Maybe if she were not looking directly into camera it would look more natural. She needs to be look to the right of you.
     
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    It's not poorly worded...everyone knows what I mean.
     
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    i guess im the minority... she's hot the picture came out looking "real" not all studio and i doubt you were going for a studio look in a shower.
     
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    It looks "real" in the amateur porn sense.
     
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    The flash combined with a shower scene combined with her deer in a headlights look makes it seem as if you ran into the bathroom said "Hay!" and the took a pic when she turned to see you. I think her head should be tilted back and her face towards the water eyes closed. then her hands in hr hair, and cropped from about 5 cm above the nipple line to above her head. Add some wide aperture bokeh and boom! Art, not porn.
     
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    That's a completely different picture! :lol:

    I dunno, the first thing I thought of when I saw this picture was amateur porn.
     
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    She has a nice body at least.
    Very very porny...
    It just has the generic look at my naked body look that porn pics are know for.
    i think the next logical pic in this series would be her bending over to pic up soap or something with you right behind her....:sexywink:
     

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