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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Cameron Cushman, May 26, 2008.

  1. Cameron Cushman

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    My lovely girlfriend let me take some close up pictures, and i thought this one came out amazing, touched it up a little bit with photoshop.
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    The eye looks nice and sharp but her cheek/nose is really overexposed which isnt so great. If you could fix this I think it would be much better.
     
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    I think it is an interesting crop, but I agree with the above post that the overexposed part draws my attention too much.
     
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    Yup great focus and detail in the eye & good crop. Generally i don't mind overexposed parts in photo's, sometimes it can't be helped but in this case i think it does draw your attention too much.
     
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    So i went back into photoshop and messed around with a few things to fix the problem. Do you guys think these two are better?

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    I think the first redo you just posted is a lot better.
     
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    Love them all, great shots.
     

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