Kat & Jeff

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  1. Efergoh

    Efergoh TPF Noob!

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    My first shoot with more than one model.
    I've done couples shoots in the past, but they were married or in a relationship.
    These two never met before walking into the studio.

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    he looks like ben affleck

    hes good i think shes a bit wooden and unnatural looking. she looks very uncomfortable

    but the poses and sharpness are spot on
     
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    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

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    The one thing I have to say is that you have serious color temperature issues. These are all over the place, and not one of them appears to be correct on my monitor.
     
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    Correct is a relative term. The variants were intentional. I was tinkering for the most part. Some are warmer, some are cooler.
     
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    Comment: (not criticism) 1&2 looks like an ad for peadophile something or other. Dunno what your intent was.
    3 is nice.
    4 is nice.
    5 looks like she knows it's wrong.
    Again I don't know what you wanted to portray so I don't know if you've done a good job or not but technically and if I make my own titles they look like good work. (barring the colour comment, probably better to let us know your angle first)
     
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    And she looks like the "One time, at band camp..." chick from American Pie.
     

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