Kerri [2 pics]

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  1. Stillwater

    Stillwater TPF Noob!

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    Please critique, I love it!


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    Strobist: Vivitar 285hv shot behind @ 1/4th power. Vivitar 285hv camera right shot through white umbrella @ 1/2 power about 8 feet away.

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    Strobist: Vivitar 285hv shot through umbrella camera right @ 1/4th power about 6' away from model.

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  2. JCleveland

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    her teeth look like they are glowing in number one lol
    they're a bit dark for my taste.. although my monitor isn't calibrated so take that comment with a grain of salt.
    I think overall I like the first the best. her expression, her positioning, that dress...
     
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    Thanks JCleveland, yeah I've noticed my photos run darker when I know they aren't going to be printed, I think I just get lazy in dealing with the curves, etc. That dress was a lot of fun to shoot with, I got a bunch of neat poses with it, but it was less than fun trying to get it to light right, as you can see in my mishap below her left arm.
     
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    These are interesting. The whites are a little distracting, but I know its part of the treatment. Pretty good.

    Go Pokes!!
     
  5. manaheim

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    Kerri is so very...

    (you'd have to be old to get that joke)

    Interesting shot, and I can see how the dress would be amusing to (ahem) work with. :lol:

    I agree with other things said... the teeth and darkness make her look a bit like abomb survivor or something, but still... interesting shots.
     
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    Honestly I think technically there excellent as far as lighting design and the model and her clothing and such. The main problem I have with these images is the fact that you used such a wide lens for them. The wide lens distorted features on what is I am sure a very attractive model but the lens just ruined it.
     
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    OMG - I'm old now? :confused: :lmao:
     
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    hehe... if you got that joke? yup. you iz OLD! :)
     

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