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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Stillwater, Aug 20, 2010.

  1. Stillwater

    Stillwater TPF Noob!

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    Vivitar 285hv shot through beauty dish camera right @ 1/16th power 1' from subject
    Nikon sb-24 shot behind at wall @ 1/4 power
    Modified Cactus v2s triggers

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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice capture! C&C per req: I'd suggest doing something about the 'U' shaped catchlight in her left eye, it's a bit disconcerting. I'd also suggest a touch more exposure camera left; just enough to bring out a little detail in her hair.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

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  3. DanFinePhotography

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    i like it, i see some purplish around the hair area not sure if thats something from a mask or other but its a tad distracting. A great shot otherwise
     
  4. Stillwater

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    Thanks guys!

    Haha well part of her hair is dyed purple..
     
  5. Scatterbrained

    Scatterbrained Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Just a touch of skin smoothing would be nice.
     
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    that explains it :mrgreen:
     
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    stillwater, love the pic. i was looking at your flickr. great pics dude.
     
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    I like it a lot! Are shots like this(with a white background) always done in a fancy studio? I would love to produce images like this sometime.
     
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    Nah, I did this in my dining room. It's easy. Pick one of these up: MPEX Strobist Kits and get started!
     
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    Great shot and nicely exposed. I actually like that you can see here skin texture because she has such perfect skin. My only niggle is the red veins in the eyes.
     

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