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  1. Simpsonic

    Simpsonic TPF Noob!

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    Hey this is the first time Í've posted a photo, Just looking for some feedback, just to see what you all think and íf it could be better...I'm still in the early days of photography...so please be kind! I used a Minolta Dynax 5D with some Macro Filters for it...

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    cagil TPF Noob!

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    I think it would be better if the keys were more clear, left part of the keys are blurred because of light...But anyway its good!:thumbup:
     
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    The idea is good but "framing" and light are not appropriate (maybe try a "square framing ")
     
  4. Simpsonic

    Simpsonic TPF Noob!

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    Thanks guys, I'll have to give it a try....

    Thanks for all your help..:)
     

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