Kid on the beach.

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  1. Ghoste

    Ghoste TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys. I'm looking for just general critique on this photo. But I'm going to give the photo to his mom and dad.. I'm wondering if there is parts I should crop out? And also what should I change.. Brightness? Pretty much if you had this photo how would you photoshop it. I'll post the photo when I'm done just to see if you still think it's ok.


    I had his brother make him laugh for me :D

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    Ok, well here is what I've worked on allready.. do you like the change?

    Brightness, Shadows, and Warming Filter 85 was added.


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    Well.. Sweet kid.. I think that it's too much shadow in his face, but that's not what you were asking for.

    Hard to say if cropping would make it better or worse.. Guess I couldn't answer the question..
     
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    i think your filters have improved it. I wish the whole photo was shifted down abit, so that you get his hand in the frame. Also maybe cropping a little of the top.
     

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