Kid's PLaying at school

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  1. joelhead

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    Ok so i was sent by my school to take pictures for them for marketing so more kids can come to the school so im not some creeper taking pictures of little kids. I would just like to know what you experienced photographers out there have to say. C&C are very welcome. and i know #3 is a little blurry.:thumbup: and i threw some others in just because i need some feed back and i took them the same day.

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    Very nice shots .....
     
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    In the first three you've definitely capture the iconic playground "movement". It brings back old memories of my childhood. :thumbup:
     
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    haha speaking of which i also captured a few shots of some kids fighting on the playground haha:lol:
     
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    i like how you toned the first one in blue. classic..

    number them.

    the last one, (bird) seems that you focus on the grass instead of the black bird.

    the 2nd one is okay, diff crop perhaps.

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