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  1. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    is it underexposed? is the white balance ok? and how's the overall composition?

    i dont know these kids, their mom was taking a picture of them and i snapped one as well. :)

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    maybe a tad dark, and the feet were cut off.
     
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    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the feedback, dom.

    looking at it on here, the kids dont look terribly in focus. is that my eyes?
     
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    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    ^^ that was going to be my first comment.

    The second was to maybe to play with levels and curves a bit.

    And lastly, whaddup with the new avvy? We want sexy Beth back!!!!
     
  5. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    just to clarify, your first thought was that they aren't in focus?

    i was bored with that avatar. im not liking this one so much either, ill find something....
     
  6. Silver.Winged.Demon

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    change the levels a bit and your focus was on the fence behind them. Also you may want to sharpen the image just a tad
     
  7. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the feedback SWD!

    seeing that these kids aren't in focus, i think im just going to leave the photo as is.
     
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    Here's an example of what I would do in levels: (in lafoto's footsteps)

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    Then I recommend sharpening the pic, I would have an example pic but photobucket is being stupid. I used radius 0.3 and 130% amount. (i think)


    I bet you know this stuff already anyways, but oh well. :biggrin:
     
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    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    i dont know this stuff yet. ive been side tracked and havent really started my photoshop studies. i so badly want to learn though!
     
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    Silver.Winged.Demon TPF Noob!

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    fixed it

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    yep, like everyone said: a bit dark and the cut off legs are not the best framing. But my real problem is the boys; they are (of course) looking in the other direction and you can hardly make out their eyes. That makes it hard for me to connect with this pic.






    pascal
     
  12. spiffybeth

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    RKW and SWD, your edits look MUCH better! thanks! :)

    pascal, thanks for the feedback.
     

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