Kiss the Cook! (my 1st pic)

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  1. Quinzo

    Quinzo TPF Noob!

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    now, seeing as this is my 1st photo I dunno if its against the professional ethics of photography or not to manip photos on photoshop but I did :) . Oh ya! The photo is of my friend when we were out camping

    Go on, be brutal!

    thanks,
    Q.

    P.S. did I mention this is my 1st photo?
     
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    I'm not seeing anything.
     
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    sorry bout that :)
     
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  5. Quinzo

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    better?
     
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    Looks a little soft to me and the horizontal crop seems wrong for all the vertical lines.
     
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    Otherwise its a nice first attempt.
     
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    Welcome to tpf :)

    I can see where you blurred the background...I'd suggest using the magnetic lasso so you don't have those obvious, geometric lines happening...Fun picture though..
     
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    What interests me is you are new to photography... and shooting B+W .. I think thats pretty cool.... Most photographers roots begin in B+W ....

    but that being said, I don't see this pic as a B+W subject, and also agree with above comment , that it should be vertical...

    but someone said also , its a fun photo, and think thats all you were asking for here, was a pic of your friend...
     
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    NOOOOOPE!!! i dont like it. looks like sum average person with no experience in photography took a pic of their friend..... but i think even they could do better as the tools things he is holding are blury
     

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