Kite Hands

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  1. Knawx

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    This is my first B&W post... I am also very new to photography, but I welcome Comments and Critique. I have thick skin, so feel free to rip me up. haha.

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    I really like this. The only thing that I would say is that the hair ties are a little distracting and a part of the arm is overexposed. It makes me think of when I was a kid and used to fly simple kites almost every day after school.
     
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    Hey thanks! Yeah I noticed some of the arm is a little blown out, and didn't even think of the hair ties when I was taking the picture. :lol:
     
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    I like it!

    Well, most of it. :lol:

    While I enjoy the tonalities of the arms and hands (aside from the aforementioned overexposure of part of one arm), the background could use some pepping up. When I think of kites I think outdoors; maybe try taking this picture or something like it again when there are more interesting cloud formations? I'm not sure, I'm not a professional.
     

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