Krista

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  1. rub

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    Had a different idea for this shoot, but when the models eyes started to water, we changed direction came up with this. C&C is appreciated.

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    Interesting photos.
     
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    i love the color of the eyes and the green grass! great shots! natural lighting is so wonderful! nice comp!
     
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    Not sure what the purpose of these are, but they are a little depressing overall. Not a bad thing, just the way I see them.

    1. Some people may argue she should be looking into the frame (not me). Some may say you shouldn't have cut her arms (not me). The thing that does bother me is the fact the wire goes right through one of her eyes. I like the lighting.

    2. All of her skin is so bright, but right below her eyes shows darkness and wrinkles. Not that these are bad, but for me they stick out compared to the rest of her skin in this photo.

    3. Not much to say.

    4. Again, not much to say.

    Don't forget the grain of salt to take with my comments! All in all, nice photos.
     
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    Thanks for the comments. Any other C&C?

    I choose to keep 1 as there was another without the eye being intersected, but the lighting and emotion of this image was far better. it kind of made me feel liek the cage was of greater importance as well, and she was less important, which really portrays a lot of thefeeling I had for this particular shoot.
     

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