la maison blanche

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  1. klissarov ik

    klissarov ik TPF Noob!

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    This shot requires postprocessing. I would selectively make the white whiter..taking out the grey and blue hue.

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    is this version better?

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    Yeah , the first shot seems to be overdone in PP... The saturation is very high, and it appears to also show haloing... You can see the halos around the sign with HM.. and all along the darker building and roofing tiles..

    The edit on this shot is much more pleasing.. I also appreciate the crop better , but feel a need to see more image at top, with a bit more blue...

    NICE Re-Do !
     

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