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Discussion in 'The Creative Corner' started by manda, May 27, 2004.

  1. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    if i were to shake off the moon
    with a kick from the last sin
    i wonder how she'd caress and effect him again
    without mistrust or wanton lust;
    would her measures of happiness
    ride on the backs of his minutes
    or feast upon a soiled minion of other names before it;
    to mistemper and feed her shadowed fables
    within the mind
    of swallowed
    discomfort and salicity...

    oh begone hankering hour.
     
  2. motcon

    motcon TPF Noob!

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    i've read this on and off for the last two hours. each time i do see something different. just as in a photograph, a good one should tug at our soul to visit it time and again, seeing something differently and/or some of the same more deeply than the previous visit.

    i've yet to be able to summarize my thoughts on this piece. i like that.

    perhaps all i can give you is silence and all i can tell you is that it moves. every time.
     
  3. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    Thank you Will.
     

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