Latest Wedding - Feedback Please

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by RainNotebook, Oct 28, 2008.

  1. RainNotebook

    RainNotebook TPF Noob!

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    Here is the latest wedding I did... some of my favorite shots... I'm curious as to what you think. Thanks

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    1) I would have zoomed in a little bit tighter to crop out that door thing (what do they call them?) or just crop it in. The angle is nice.

    2) For this type of shot, I don't like the angle and the girl on the right is distracting. Great exposure and the dress looks nice. Good detail on it.

    3) Could be brighter but without loosing the detail in the dress. Actually, what's darkest to me is the bouqet. Also, the dress has a blueish/green tint to it. I'm sure that wasn't the color.

    4) Little bit underexposed. Crop out the lady on the right.

    5) Also a bit underexposed. You have some funky stuff going on with the flowers. The color seems off. Also, crop out that arm with the bracelet in the bottom left corner. Why did someone have a braclet on at a wedding anyways?

    Look for the finer detail in the shot. Good composition on all of them but the color and exposure need to be worked on and made sure to keep track of on your next shoot.

    What was your set up, equipment wise?

    ~Michael~
     
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    Thanks for you feedback...

    I had Canon Digital Rebel XT (getting ready to upgrade)

    4 lenses... (forgive me if I don't remember all the details)
    a sigma 2.8 28-70mm (which was the one I used the most)
    a canon 1.8 50 mm
    a canon 3.5-5.6 27-55mm
    a 3.5-5.6 80-300mm which I didn't even bring out (not sure on brand...)

    I also had a canon speedlite ex480
     

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