Lauren

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by photographiti, Mar 12, 2008.

  1. photographiti

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    My first real attempt at studio-ish portraits. C&C very much appreciated!!

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    so a disclaimer, I don't know much about studio work but to me I think the lighting could be improved. Less back light and more and softer lighting on her face.

    I like the lighting in the third the best but think I like the position of her face best in 2, i think it shows off her features the best.
     
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    I agree, maybe a little less back lighting. Number three is probably the best in my opinion. You've got a great start!
     
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    Thanks guys! I really appreciate the feedback!
     

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