Liberty Memorial -- CC please

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  1. Baaaark

    Baaaark TPF Noob!

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    This seems to be as good as I can balance the photo.[​IMG]
     
  2. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Not sure I like the square crop.

    Seems you tried to get the words on the floor in the shot to have some importance, but the crop, angle and having both the words and the column in the image kind of unbalances it. I also find that the words on the floor and slightly out of focus.

    I would maybe chose either the column as my subject and go with a more portrait shot with less of a "I was standing there and took a straight on shot of this place" OR focus on the words on the floor, get them sharp and make them more prominent (ex: angle your camera down towards them keeping only part of the column in the frame) and have a wider aperture to blur out the column in the background.
     
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    Ah, a KC man. Or were you just up here for Rockfest?
     

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