I posted this over in the general gallery as well, but I really want to tear this one apart, specifically. I think it could be an astounding photo, but something's still wrong with it. For one thing, the DOF was way too short and I ended up out of the DOF, so I know that's probably going to require a reshoot. But what else can be done here? I think something is wrong with the lighting, but I can't put my finger on it...too harsh maybe??