Lily

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  1. Hawkwrithe

    Hawkwrithe TPF Noob!

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    First time posting on the forum. I thought this might be an okay place to start.

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  2. molested_cow

    molested_cow No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    That's a lily?
     
  3. Hawkwrithe

    Hawkwrithe TPF Noob!

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    No, it's a dog. Here's your sign.

    Just kidding. Hope that didn't come off as rude.

    Yes, it's a lily. A day lily from my mom's garden.
     
  4. MDowdey

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    great shot too!!

    md
     
  5. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    Hi Hawkwrithe,

    welcome to the forum! The first thing that caught my eye was the nice use of complementary colours, the orange and blue really is striking. good stuff!

    couple of nitpicks:

    a. the petal on the right is a bit blown out, usually blowouts aren't a big deal to me, but here it draws my eye in the the green leaf in the corner.
    b. The stamen things on the right side get blended in with the dark background. Maybe position the lens so they all appear in front of an orange petal?

    Thanks for sharing that with us!
     
  6. mrsid99

    mrsid99 TPF Supporters Supporting Member

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    I always love a flower shot but this one needs a lot more DOF.
     

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