Lindsey

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Tiberius47, Dec 21, 2009.

  1. Tiberius47

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    From a shoot I had yesterday with Lindsey, a lovely young woman.

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    I've edited these photos as suggested in the thread...
     
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    I like number one, clean simple and to the point with out looking like it!
     
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    I agree, IMO #1 is the best. I wish there was detail in the dress but the pose, color, sharpness are really nice.

    Again, IMO, #2 and #3 would have benefited from a fill-flash to balance the sun. #2 had deep shadows and looks over-saturated. #3 the foreground and the subject are just too dark.



    #4, the burnt out patches on her forehead, r cheekbone, chest are too obvious and might better ahve been fixed before the conversion. that highlights them.

    nice edit on #3
     
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  4. Tiberius47

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    I actually used flash on all of them... Not enough, it seems...
     
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    I liked 1 & 2, but on 3, perhaps shoot from above to see her face and hands as the water splashes, and on 4 hmmm I just don't know, something is off.
     
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    3 is my favorite.
     
  7. JClishe

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    For #3, did you only use fill flash and natural lighting? There's something about the lighting in that shot that looks odd to me but I can't put my finger on it. Not in a bad way, I rather like it actually, but the lighting is just...odd.
     
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    She was in shade, so I had flash off to camera left.
     
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    I like pictures 1 and 3. Keep up the good work. [​IMG]
     

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