Lindsey

[Tiberius47]

From a shoot I had yesterday with Lindsey, a lovely young woman.

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4

I've edited these photos as suggested in the thread...

 

[Jhamb]

I like number one, clean simple and to the point with out looking like it!

 

[The_Traveler]

I agree, IMO #1 is the best. I wish there was detail in the dress but the pose, color, sharpness are really nice.

Again, IMO, #2 and #3 would have benefited from a fill-flash to balance the sun. #2 had deep shadows and looks over-saturated. #3 the foreground and the subject are just too dark.



#4, the burnt out patches on her forehead, r cheekbone, chest are too obvious and might better ahve been fixed before the conversion. that highlights them.

nice edit on #3

 

[Tiberius47]

I actually used flash on all of them... Not enough, it seems...

 

[wescobts]

I liked 1 & 2, but on 3, perhaps shoot from above to see her face and hands as the water splashes, and on 4 hmmm I just don't know, something is off.

 

[Nikkor]

3 is my favorite.

 

[JClishe]

For #3, did you only use fill flash and natural lighting? There's something about the lighting in that shot that looks odd to me but I can't put my finger on it. Not in a bad way, I rather like it actually, but the lighting is just...odd.

 

[Tiberius47]

She was in shade, so I had flash off to camera left.

 

[jennyjen]

I like pictures 1 and 3. Keep up the good work.