Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by invisible, Mar 22, 2009.
One of my adventures in abstract...
D70s, f/2.8 @ 16 mm, 1/200, ISO 200.
Thanks for looking.
Abstract? That looks pretty concrete.
(I'm sooo sorry)
Nice lines/angles. I think it could use a bit more contrast, though. There seems to be a lack of shadow that puts the whole image into a very narrow tonal range.
I agree with the last poster--try more contrast. Have you played around with Curves in Photoshop? You may also want to try different types of cropping. But nice lines and angles.
i find it very interesting. a nice one to add to your collection i think.
i think the post-processing on the metal bars is just right, i don't think it needs any more contrast. not really a fan of the composition though, but that's just me.
Thanks for your comments, guys and gals. This is the best post-processing job I could do (needless to say, my PP skills are very limited). I'm more than willing to send the original RAW file to whoever wants to take a stab at it. Just let me know.
It has a nice 3-D feel on my monitor..
i like it!
beautiful but you need to add contrast just a little
i made some editing:
i like the original. but could i get a copy to play around with?
Thanks Wyjid. Please PM me your email address and I'll send you the RAW file right away.
Thanks stsinner and Al-Wazeer! A-W, I like the added contrast in your edit, but now the image looks like out of a comic book
here you go, long time in coming.
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