Lines of Annapolis

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  1. jocose

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    Here's another from the Annapolis shoot. I'm not sure I like this one, so I would appreciate some honest feedback, particularly on my PS work.

    Thanks.

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    I dunno, I'm split. On the one hand, you did an (I think) excellent job at getting the tones, etc just right..but on the other...the shot/subject itself just doesn't do anything for me, it's 'just' a (presumably a) roof.
     
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    Thanks for the comments.

    GoM, it's the side of a building, actually, but yea...that's kind of what I feel like also.

    Thanks, Aaron!
     
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    Hah, I'm the other way round :mrgreen:

    I love the shot but the tones don't do much for me. Perhaps a B&W conversion?

    EDIT: I'd also have a play with the transform tool to get the lines completly parallel with the edges.
     
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    I think it's a neat shot. As stated above though I would like it better if the lines were completely straight.
     
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    OK, gang, I have done my best to adjust the tilt. What say you now?
     
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    this is Exactly what i wanted to say, so i wont do it, ill just quote Mohain -:)

    good job! -:)

    anja
     
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    Looks good :thumbup:
     
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    thanks again.
     

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