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railman44

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I'm not real happy with this but here it is...

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Ooh theres something very intriguing about this... the tones are really nice, but I think it would work better without the lighter section at the bottom. The contrast to the rest of it really draws the eye down there when it wants to be travelling those lines instead.
 
Railman, I like the photo but for composition I would have probably taken that pic at about a 45 degree angle, so the tracks drew me into the darkened window frame. Meaning I would have probably kneeled down at the lower right or left for the shot. IMO. It's still good as is though too.
 

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