Lion and tower

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  1. negative

    negative TPF Noob!

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    Hi all, I took this picture the other night and I'm not sure about a few things. I am wondering if the composition is right as well as the exposure on the clock tower. Also, I cropped out a bunch of distracting objects. Please tell me what i could do to make this better next time i shoot at that location.

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    newrmdmike TPF Noob!

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    i think next time you should stand off to the right some to get more distance between lion and tower.

    also, if i were taking this i would take a spotlight and reveal some of the detail in the lions face.
     
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    THe comp seems loose and sloppy (and we all don't like that, in both pictures and women right? lol jk jk) just tighten it up and burn the clock face and tip a little.
     
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    ^^Thats about the dumbest thing i've ever read.
     

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