Lisa Marie for Legs Magazine

[Hertz van Rental]

The problem with the lighting is that you seem to have used two light sources (two brollies?) and got the balance wrong.
But that's only a minor niggle.
The main problem with the picture is that the pose is clumsy.
With a name like Legs Magazine I would imagine that it panders to people with a leg fetish. The aim of the photographer therefore is to show off the legs to best advantage.
The pose in this shot is less than flattering, the legs being too wide apart.
This has taken almost all the shape out of the legs and forced her to bend her ankles giving her legs a slightly bowed look.
She looks like she is having trouble standing up in heels.
The pose and clothes also focus attention on the crotch area which appears unflatteringly wide.
And the cheesecake pose of bum slightly thrust back combined with the white skirt makes her bum look big.
The legs need to be about a foot closer together.
Check out the work of Elmer Batters - he was one of the best with this sort of thing. But his work does border on the very, very naughty so don't go looking for him unless you are broadminded - and not at work.