Little bit of macro photography....

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  1. teishu

    teishu TPF Noob!

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    What do you think about these ?

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    I really like the first one i like the angle the only thin i would have done is to crop pretty much right above the flower then right beside the flower (if that makes sense) just to cut more of the background out and i think that would also help the composition.
    Also using the clone tool in ps to remove the grey stick or whatever it is.
    Great image though.
     
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    i agree, i'd crop tighter on the first one on the top and right of image to have the flower be mostly in the upper right corner. that will bring more focus to the flower itself and not the background.

    the 2nd photo is interesting, as i can't recall having seen a flower like that before. but the image is a little bit overexposed i think. the edges that are white are abit too harsh on my screen (could be not calibrated correctly) but a slightly less exposed image might have been easier on the eyes.

    also dead center is ok, but might be better if it was slightly to a side or something
     

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