Little Photo Walk - C&C Encouraged!

PhotoXopher

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Before I headed out, Nikon 50mm f/1.8D
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The rest are with my Nikon 35-70 f/2.8D

Soldier statue at the veterans memorial:
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The wall:
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Eagle:
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I tend to try and stay away from the highest aperature on any of my lenses. Usually I'll settle on 1 AV from the highest. I think that might be the focus problem with the first image. The rest are focused nicely and some good ideas, tho war memorial bores me (I guess Im cynical). Composition is pretty good except for the dead space in the 4th image.

EDIT: On the memorial wall image I think I would have liked the focus on the second plank to sort of lead into the photo a bit more

Hope my C&C was constructive!
 
Thank you, definitely helped!

For some reason I always find myself shooting wide open - maybe that's something I need to work on, thank you for bringing it to my attention.

I also see what you mean about maybe the second column being the focus, it would draw me in more.
 

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