Lone house

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  1. Tangerini

    Tangerini TPF Noob!

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    Please let me know what you think... :) I'm trying to learn!
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    1st one is perfect!
     
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    #1 for me too. The only thing that gets to me is that there's a little too much space between the top of the tree and the jet. If you could bring the top down a bit then the empty space wouldnt bother me so much.
     
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    Wow that really means a lot, I think you are so very talented! :blulsh2:

    I definitely appreciate your comment, but I'm not sure I agree? One of the reasons I like this one is the gradual lightening of the sky, and I'm not sure you'd still get that effect cropping in?
     
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    #1 for sure. Is the spec above and to the right of the house another plane?

    What would #2 look like if you cropped most of the black from the bottom of the picture? At the moment it is drawing my eye away from the rest of the image.

    Mike
     
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    with the second one you could think of cropping away alot of the dark space at the lower end ... the house in the first one is slightly tilted.. but apart from that i like it. .. oh, would clone out that bird or UFO though ;)
     
  7. Tangerini

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    Yes, the spec is a plane, most likely a Cessna (I live right by an airport)

    Like this?
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    Thank you all for your kind comments and help! :goodvibe:
     
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    Yes, that works better for me, but ultimately you have to be the judge.

    Mike
     
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    i think the jet is distracting in #1. i like the image a lot anyhow
     

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