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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by hoosier40000, Mar 27, 2006.

  1. hoosier40000

    hoosier40000 TPF Noob!

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    i took this picture this weekend while i was out roaming the streets.... as always, im open to criticism or suggestions. thanks for looking.

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    It's an interesting shot, but I think it would have benefited if shot in a portrait view.
     
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    DestinDave Master of Non Sequitur

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    I agree with Woodsac about the format. And I find the little bit of baluster and ramp on the right distracting. Otherwise it's a great shot and I like it a lot...
     
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    I really like the concept and the POV. But I agree, the "stuff" on the right is a bit distracting.
     
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    hoosier40000 TPF Noob!

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    thats alot for the thoughts, would this be better?

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    hoosier40000 TPF Noob!

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    photobucket sized that one different...weird.
     
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    I like it. Mystical.. Good job!
     
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    I like the first one, possibly with a cm or so cropped off the bottom to make it a 16:9 type letterbox ratio.

    I think using horizontal aspect is actually effective in this, and the blueish MTV style colour cast adds to the urban feel of the shot.

    So, I like it, possibly with a little crop off the bottom. Good job!

    Rob
     
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    hoosier40000 TPF Noob!

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    thanks everyone, i really appreciate all your help
     
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    hot shot TPF Noob!

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    i like it
     
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    I really like this one. I also think it works if you crop either from the left or the right, making the figure in the top right or left corner and leaving all of the foreground in ... if that makes sense!
     
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    I really like the first shot fine the way it is, i like the low view point good capture mate :wink:
     

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