Lonely Curb

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  1. doobs

    doobs TPF Noob!

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    I'm curious as to anyone even likes this picture. I hate the fence on the side, but I did shoot it at f/2.8 and my camera has like no DOF for some crazy reason. I figured the lighting was good, so I was curious as to what people thought of it. I like the black and white one the most. Any opinions?

    1. Original. Un-photoshopped (other than the signature at the bottom)
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    2. Cropped. Still un-photoshopped.
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    3. Black and white. This is also the cropped version.
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    Is it fodder for the trash or do you think I actually have something going for me here?
     
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    jeroen No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I prefer the B&W version, since your white balance being off is
    ruining the color version. The B&W does look underexposed though IMO.

    For composition, I would crop to portrait and loose the entire fence and the curb to the right. You'd get something abstract then with the nice zigzag lines.
     
  3. doobs

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    I really can't cut off the fence that far, or I'll lose some of the curbs. I'll mess around with it tomorrow morning. I'm pooped.
     

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