Lonely Girl

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  1. hotrocks

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    her face doesn't look that sharp, otherwise i like it.
     
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    she's cute.
     
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    Its being nit-picky, but I would dodge the shoe a little bit. Great composition and lighting though!
     
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    I like it a lot too. The picture actually shows a lot of feeling which is well, what your supposed to do. Good picture.

    As stated, dodging a bit on the shoe would make it a 10/10. Looks like a bilboard picture of some sort. About highschool bullying or something.
     
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    which shoe?

    the front one is bright..do you mean burn?
     
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    Whoops, yes I do. :lol:
     
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    Nice shot, However.. I think it would go better in the People/Pets section.
     
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    I like it
     
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    I really like the compostion, exposure and the background is perfect....her expression doesn't convince me though. I think getting her looking directly at the camera and thinking about the feeling of lonliness/emptiness would produce a better result.
     
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    yeah the shoe closest to the camera i feel draws too much attention. I like the colors and mood of the picture and the background as well. i also don't feel that convinced about her expression.
     
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    The title is irritating (at least to me), as I cannot see loneliness anywhere.

    Oh, and her right foot is pretty big. Almost the most prominent element in the shot.
     

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