Lonely sailboat...

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  1. Mikis

    Mikis TPF Noob!

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    Asking for constuctive critique;)
     
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    I like it, but I feel it lacks something - although I'm not sure exactly what. Sorry, thats no help at all :D

    I wonder how it would have looked if you had waited a few moments for the boat to progress further across the shot. That would have allowed you to put the sun in the right third, and the boat in the left third. Just a thought.
     
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    Very good shot. Colors are tight. the ripples have a nice reflective quality.
    MAYBE a little closer to target so its would be more in focaus. Maybe. But great shot.
     
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    IMO The sun is a little to centered and maybe needs a little more angle
     
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    i would poop my pants if i took that picture!
     
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    great photo,maybe the birds couldbe cloned out,if you have a ps program.
    could the boat be in the sun,s reflectance? good phot though
     
  7. Mikis

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    Sun is in the center but because of that a sailboat seems to be important in the photo.


    You will take much better photographs in the future:). I'm also just a beginner... :blushing:


    I know but that was final abilities of my lens:p


    Thanks to everybody for feedbacks:D
     

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