Lonely Walk...

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  1. capturedinfocus

    capturedinfocus TPF Noob!

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    nice shot! seems highly medaphoical...not sure if you intended that or not but oh well :p


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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    I like the colors here and the shadow of boy
     
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    I like his position and also the white path says innocence to me but I'm not sure if I'm reading too much into it... :lol: Great shot, well done.
     
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    Lula Cracks-Up At Crazy Titles!

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    So cute
    Nice pic 8)
     
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    hmm... in mu opinion the boy looks sad.

    maybe edit it to b/w will ad to the drama...
     
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    my first reaction: owww! that's so sad!

    Don't know if that was what you were trying to convey though?
     
  8. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    That is a nice shot, and an appropriate title to suit the subject. Great shadow. I'd LOVE it if there were more space above his head to further accentuate the "aloneness", especially with that fabulous shadow of the tree in the background. (If you cropped any out, add a little back in.) :wink:

    Nice work! :D
     
  9. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I agree with Terri, but also would like to see a little different composition; the boy should be on the left side of the frame and his whole shadow in view. Try not to center your subject in each shot.
     
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    i cropped out a sliver of a parking lot :lol: i was sort of fighting it, but the lower "ceiling" of the picture is better than the parking lot...
     
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    yeah...that's one of the only things i don't like about this picture... i'm sure i'll get another one sometime :)
     
  12. Alison

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    I agree with the compostion suggestion to shift the liitle guy to the left. However, working with children I also know they move fast :)
     

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