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  1. cherrymoose

    cherrymoose TPF Noob!

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    I shot this last weekend in SF. She noticed me just as I was clicking the shutter and started glaring crazily. :| I know the string obstructing her face is annoying, and I know it would probably look better with a border-- but besides that, C&C on this shot?

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Brave girl! You aimed at her and took the shot and suffered the daggers. Wow.

    What IS it that is obstructing her head?

    I like the scene, composition, conversion ... it is good, just apart from those funny lines. What are they?

    I think I'd rotate this 1° CW...
     
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    Interesting... looks like someone has drawn over the image... I wonder what they are.. It actually makes a interesting point of the photo!
     
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    ha i can just imagine that
     
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    Em, I like it, but to me it feels a little 'heavy' on the left. maybe putting her at the 1/3 point from the edge would help. Other than that (and the string), i like it.

    I see she's sitting on a pretty big cleat...is this at fisherman's warf, or one of the piers?
     

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