looking for crit

[JonMikal]

messing with RAW settings, i totally screwed up, but just wanted to get your feeling for composition. i dont like photographing people much and am trying to find compositions that interest me. anyways, please just let me know what you think. thanks as always!

 

[Big Mike]

It's more interesting than an ordinary baby snap shot but it's not really jumping out at me.

Maybe if the baby in the background was in focus...

The foot is in the picture...but I can't see that it's serving a purpose to the feel of the photo. Maybe I'm missing the point, but that's what I'm getting.

 

[JonMikal]

thanks Mike. i had a feeling the baby in the background would be an issue. there is no rhyme or reason to the foot; just thought it would add something off kilter.

 

[Big Mike]

I was just thinking that it would have been great if the foot was covering the other kid's bottle...making it look like was sucking on a huge foot.

 

[JonMikal]

 

[Nytmair]

hmmmmm... the pic isn't showing up for me :scratch:

 

[jadin]

Stop deleting your pictures before we can see them jonmikal!!

Oh please.

 

[Bre]

Stop deleting your pictures before we can see them jonmikal!!

Oh please.


Yup, what he said!