Looking for some C&C on these photos!

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  1. Ashlorraine

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    Hey I would really appreciate if anyone could critique/help with these photos! Thanks!


    ONE - I took this photograph of my friend, but does it bother you that half her face is shady?

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    TWO- same problem (w/ shady head)? but it was honestly so hard to get close enough to these birds w/ just my kit lens...Need to make some money :)
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    THREE- I literally sat in bird poop rocks for 30 minutes before they flew over me, finally hahah!
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    FOUR- I added a little purple tint w/ post editing
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    FIVE- Im kinda iffy about this photo...do you like it or is it just blah?
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    SIX- Ok this isnt necessarily for critique but I just thought it was really cute!! hahah i love my dog...even though he doesn't behave, clearly..
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    Thanks Everyone!!
     
  2. peanut170

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    really like 3 and 4, good job as far as im concerened.
     
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    four is my fav
     
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    3 and four are awesome!! :D

    i like number one but the the shadows annoy me slightly, not so much her face more like the harsh horizontal one in her hair
     
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    1. Yeah I think the fact that her face is shaded almost symmetrical is kinda throwing me off.

    2. While a cool shot of the bird, the composition seems kinda boring. Also I didn't even realize that pic had sky in it for the longest time.

    3. I really like how this one turned out, it looks nice.

    4. While I like it, I'm not sure if I like the fact that all of the other leaves/branches in the shot go right up to the horizon/mountain line, yet none go over. I'm curious how this might have looked from a slightly lower angle.

    5. Seems kinda blah to me.

    6. Awesome dog, is he a husky? (I'm assuming he is but not familiar with them enough to be sure.)
     
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    3,4,&5 looks great. any PP done to 3?
     
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    3 and 4 are EXCELLENT. Very nice, especially 3.
     
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    The shady-ness of one doesn't bother me as much as the over-exposed chest going on. No I'm not a prude or anything, lol.. But this is the third picture or so I've here in a week's time where the woman looked ready to "fall out" at any moment. Be careful posing women and aware of how their shirt/necklines are falling across (or hanging off) their torso's...unless you're purposely aiming for budoir photography. As it is, the pose just isn't flattering with her choice of clothing.

    I love the last shot of the dog, adorable =)
     
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    pretty good over all really love three four and five she is a beautiful model just a little bit softer light would probably be better or have her in a spot were the light was slightly a little softer and could light more of her face.
     
  10. misstwinklytoes

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    I noticed the shirt too, but figured it was done purposely. The shadow is distracting but not so much that it kills the shot.
     
  11. DanFinePhotography

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    These are nice, looks like #1 might be a tad overexposed in areas. I am really liking #3
     
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    I agree.. number three is beautiful!
     

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